Chapter 1
This is the first chapter of my fan-fiction folks, I hope you like it. (By the way, this is 10 years after the epilogue) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
- The small town of Dar on Sargasso Island is shown*
- Villagers are going about their business, with Marine soldiers patrolling the streets. Suddenly the peacefullness is broken by a yell!*
????: TOMAS!!!! YOU GET YOUR THIEFING ASS BACK HERE!!!! *A large man in a marine outfit and no sleeves wielding 2 large axes followed by several marine soldiers chase after Tomas, who is running down the street*
Tomas: *carrying a loaf of bread and running quickly* Oh, calm down Nero! It's just a loaf of bread!
Nero: Yeah, …
The beginning
This is the epilogue of my fan fiction. I hope you like it.
- A slim 8 year old boy wearing a torn up white button-up shirt and worn black dress pants runs down an alley*
????: You can't run forever boy!
- A tall man with a scimitar chases after the boy, followed by a small man with a rifle and a large man with a mallet all of them dressed in simple peasant clothing*
????: My name's Tomas and you know it Andre! Stop calling me boy already! *knocks over some crates*
Andre: *Jumps over the crates* I know it because you keep stealing from me, boy! Now stand still so I can kill you! *almost catches up to Tomas and swings his scimitar at him but misses*
Tomas: You'll have to do better than that if you want your beli back, Andre! *runs into a dead end* An…
The Names of OP
Lvdoomien here, and I'm discussing the weird names of the characters in OP. And no not the strangeness of their names, like Ganzack and Bellemere, I mean why so many characters have their surnames (last names) in front of their normal names. For example Roronoa Zoro and Monkey D. Luffy have their last names first and I'm sure some people have thought thats Luffy's real name was Monkey and the same with Zoro like me before I figured it out. But what I've been looking for is insight on the simplest question: why? Why the surnames first, and also why are some people's surnames last, like that Dadans? Anybody have any idea?