Ok this is my first one and i will try my best..:
Its called The Neptune Kingdom
Page 1:Outside the Kingdom
Luffy:Wooow it's Huuuuuuugeee
Usopp:So this is the famous Neptune Kingdom
Page 2:Inside the Kingdom
Netune:So thanks guys for saving my pet Megalo..He was missing for three days now..
Usopp:Emm No problem..
Nami:Woow so many treasures....
Neptune:Yes..I got them from my father and one day i will give them to my kids
Page 3:Arive in the living room
Robin(Sitting in the table):Hey guys
Luffy: We are finally gathering agaaain
Usopp:Where is Zoro..Ohh and Franky.?
Robin:I dont know,we got separated in the current
Luffy:Well,I hope they are okay..
Usopp:Where are your sons?For a second i though they were going to capture us..
Neptune:They will be here in a second
Page 6:Neptune sons brought Sanji and Chopper
Nami:Sanjiii are you allright..?
Luffy:No dont look at heeer
Sanji:It's okay..My blood is fine now..Thanks to..to..(cry)
Usopp:Well they were the only ones who could give you blood..
Luffy:Anyway is great to have you back normal..So old man what do you want from us?
Neptune:Hohoho Nothing just to warn you guys about Hodi Jones
Fukaboshi:Yeah he is a menace around here..And you should be carefull
Luffy:Don't worry,..Nobody can stop me now..
Neptune:Hoho okay,just be carefull
Nami:So whats going on with Big Mam around here?
Neptune:Well Big Mam is the savior of this island..We dont wanna see her angry side..
Page 10:Caribou sneaked in the Kingdom and he is watching them from a window
Caribou:Finally,I got you Straw Hat..You are so stupid to make me your enemy..Now you'll see
Caribou:(What..I've been spotted again?) <Run away>
Luffy:So where is your daughter Neptune?
Neptune:Ho ho i guess she is upstairs...
Luffy:Cool i wanna see her
Page 12:Back in the Noah
Dosun: What we will do next Captain?
Jones:Next my friends we will attack the Neptune Kingdom and show them for what we are capable off..
Daruma:Hahaha I'm ready to kill them..Hahaha
Icaros:Let's go then
Page 13:a waitor bring them food
Sanji: Luffy wait to see my new cuisine..
Luffy:This is very gooood
Nami:Will you guys show us the way to the New World?
Neptune:Suree.Are you ready kid?
Neptune:To go to the New World?
Page 15:Somewhere at the Fishman Island
Zoro:Where in the hell am I????They got lost again...Geezz..Hmmm i should go this way..Or that way??
THE END....Thanks for reading...Comment and rate please...